A resume example is most useful when you understand why specific choices were made. Here’s what three real-world examples reveal about strong resume writing.


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Borislav Stojkov
Principal Resume Writer
Borislav Stojkov is a Principal Resume Writer at Toptal Resume. His professional track record includes personally reviewing and rewriting more than 2,000 resumes for professionals across industries. In his direct work with clients and the development of AI-based resume-writing services, he focuses on ATS-optimized structure, modern template design, and recruiter-aligned writing and formatting standards.
The best resume examples are those that help you understand why certain choices are made to create each section: why a professional summary opens with that specific statement, why work experience bullets use those exact metrics, or why the skills section lists those very competencies. This guide provides three examples of good resumes written for a student, a career changer, and an experienced engineer, and shows their strengths, trade-offs, and improvements you can make when you start working on yours. Choose the most appropriate resume example for your job, focus on understanding the strategy behind every detail, and apply it in creating your own.
Before we examine the three examples in detail, the table below presents a checklist used to evaluate each and ensure they represent good resume examples, as a recruiter would when reading your resume.
| Review Criterion | What a Strong Example Shows | Weak or Misleading Approach | What to Check |
|---|---|---|---|
| Relevance to the target job | The candidate’s experience and skills clearly match the role and career level | Generic summary that could apply to anyone, and unrelated duties listed | Every segment of the resume confirms the fit for the target role |
| Real, specific evidence | Clear results, tools, and scope supported by the candidate’s experience | Unjustified praise, invented metrics, or unsupported achievements | All achievements are related to the candidate's work and supported by real evidence |
| Readable structure | Clearly separated sections with easy-to-find headings, consistent dates, and logical section order | Dense paragraphs with barely readable text, missing dates, or a crowded layout | The content is easy to read, and the most important sections are prominent |
| Relevant skills | Skills demonstrated through work, projects, or education/training | Keywords copied from a job ad without being demonstrated | All the listed skills are linked to the candidate’s experience |
| ATS and export readability | Standard section titles and content that follows logical reading order | A complex design (even if visually attractive) that can cause parsing problems | The resume is easy to read from top to bottom, and it’s clear which information belongs to which section |
You can also run any resume example through a resume checker to verify that it checks all the boxes listed above. Toptal Resume's ATS resume checker provides a comprehensive analysis that covers not only formatting but also language, achievements, skills, and role fit.
Now that we've defined the criteria for determining whether a resume example is strong and more likely to perform well, we'll apply them to analyze three great resume examples written for three different job search scenarios:
All the examples examined use Toptal Resume's professional resume templates, adapted for these specific job-search situations.
The first resume example, shown in the image below, is an entry-level resume written for a hospitality student applying for an event coordinator role.

Here's what works well in this resume example:
"Collaborated with a 12-person volunteer team to ensure smooth event flow from arrival to close"
One trade-off: Although the professional summary leads with the experience context and mentions the skills acquired through academic and volunteering roles, it's expanded with adjectives such as "reliability", "warm communication", and "genuine enthusiasm." It might not be very useful in a standard resume, but it's acceptable in entry-level resumes, especially for client-facing roles.
The second resume example, shown in the image below, is a career-change resume, written for a candidate transitioning from teaching into corporate learning & development.

Here's what works well in this resume example:
"Brings a strong track record of designing structured learning programs, assessing outcomes, and adapting content to diverse audiences."
One trade-off: All role titles listed in the work experience are English teacher roles, but almost no classroom language is used, which might make the candidate's background seem confusing. That said, the goal of a career-change resume is to make it instantly clear that the applicant is the right fit for the job, and adding irrelevant details would dilute the entire document.
The third resume example is a software engineer resume written for a full-stack software engineer targeting senior and lead roles.

Here's what works well in this resume example:
“Senior Software Engineer with extensive experience in full-stack development, system design, and cloud-native architectures. Skilled in building scalable applications, designing robust APIs, and delivering secure user interfaces.”
One trade-off: For tech roles, it's common to group skills and place them near the top, because stack matters. That said, it can take up more space than placing them in the sidebar, as in this example. Also, senior candidates should rely more on work impact than on listing tools alone.
To see more strong resume examples, explore Toptal Resume's gallery of expert-written resume examples that cover many different jobs and industries.
The table below explores resume examples in greater detail and presents "before and after" versions of the same candidate facts using fragmented resume excerpts. It explains how to phrase specific bullet points, summaries, or skills, and how to avoid common resume-writing mistakes. Resume samples shown relate to the same job-search situations: entry-level candidates, career changers, and experienced professionals. No facts are changed, but are reframed to make a weak draft more credible and more specific.
| Candidate | Source Notes | Weak Draft | Improved Resume Excerpt | Why It Works |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Entry-level candidate applying for a junior business operations role (bullet point) | Had a sheet for weekly inventory counts in Excel for a bookstore internship | Transformed supply chain operations with advanced business intelligence | Updated weekly inventory counts in Excel during a campus bookstore internship | Keeps the real tool and task without making up an advanced role or impact |
| Experienced candidate applying for a customer success role (bullet point) | Handled client escalations and prepared weekly status reports | Drove multimillion-dollar client retention through strategic leadership | Managed issue escalations for 12 client accounts and prepared weekly status reports | Adds a realistic metric, without exaggerating the scope |
| Career changer applying for customer support roles (bullet point) | Trained six new café staff on daily opening procedures | Senior enterprise onboarding specialist and customer experience executive | Trained six new team members on daily opening procedures and task handoffs | Highlights transferable skills without inventing a new job title |
| Entry-level candidate applying for an event coordinator role (summary) | I have hospitality experience through volunteering and projects | Known for reliability, warm communication, and a genuine enthusiasm for creating positive guest experiences | Hospitality Management student with hands-on experience in customer-facing and event coordination roles through university volunteering and extracurricular activities | Leads with a specific experience context, rather than generic adjectives |
| Career changer applying for L&D roles (skills section) | General high school teacher competencies | Classroom Management, Lesson Planning, Differentiated Instruction | Instructional Design, Training Facilitation, Outcome-based Assessment | Uses transferable skills and the language of the new field |
Resumes need to be targeted and tailored for the role you're applying for. Their main job is to prove your fit for the job, and every line should aim to strengthen your application. If you need help creating the most appropriate content for your resume, Toptal's AI resume builder guides you through every section and offers tailored suggestions for your target role.
A resume example becomes really useful when you adapt it to a specific job posting, and that's what you'll learn in this chapter. Below is a walk-through of adapting Sophia's entry-level resume example for a job application.
The scenario: Sophia is a hospitality management student, and she now wants to apply for an event coordinator position at a hotel. The job description mentions the following requirements:
Tailoring your resume for a job application is essential to achieving strong performance. Let's examine what needs to be adjusted in Sophia's to best match the posting.
Sophia doesn't need to invent anything, as her facts already include relevant experience for all the posting's priorities:
Regarding the volunteering section of Sophia's resume, the two entries are correctly ordered. Besides following the logical chronological order, the first entry demonstrates the most important requirement: event logistics.
What could be improved is switching the order of the sections by placing Volunteering before Projects, as that's a more relevant, hands-on experience than school projects. If you use Toptal Resume's AI resume builder, it includes a section reordering feature, which allows you to adapt the resume's layout by placing more relevant information first.
Sophia's summary already mentions the target job as "event coordination roles," which is good practice. For entry-level resumes, it's common to be unsure about how to weave in a role that you never had, as your experience is limited. In such cases, you can name the role you're targeting, but always back it up with your relevant skills that confirm you're a strong fit.
Always include in your skills section the skills that are mentioned in the job posting and make them easy to find. In Sophia's case, the most relevant ones are already there ("Event Setup & Coordination" and "Guest Communication"). A good strategy would be to place them at the top of the skills section. Of course, never list a skill that you don't have, as it can backfire during the interview phase.
Good resume examples can still lead to bad results if not handled properly and carefully, and here are the most common mistakes when using them to create your resume:
A useful resume example shows you how to present strong evidence of job fit for a specific role. Explore Toptal Resume's full resume examples gallery and apply all the steps presented in this guide to any of them to learn what makes a strong resume. As a next step, use the AI resume builder to create your own version through a guided process with tailored content suggestions for your role.
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